All Comments on 'Trailing Home Ch. 12'

much awaited! finally made it! awesome!

this is what we've been waiting for...home at last...just one more chapter???OMG what will we do without this story*sigh*...i do love this story so much and hope you go onto something just as wonderful as quickly as possible. We do adore you haremgirl and love to read you. Thank you very much for all your hard work and sharing your talent with us...your fans. one in Texas naynay

i thought the story was beautifully written.

i can't wait to read more.

I am happy and sad at the same time because I am glad to be getting close to the end but sad b/c I loved it so much and don't want it to end!!! I hope you have another one soon after this. Thanks for a wonderful story. It is so good.

Since Naomi mentioned that she and Sarah both had to go through staking claims on their husbands, dare we hope that their stories are to follow?!?! And just what will happen to Natasha?!?!

I always love your stories!

They're so well written.

I can't wait to read the next one!

An excellent tale, well woven and nicely paced, you are a credit to Literotica. I have thoroughly enjoyed every word and hope you take this a lot further. I loved it, don't ever stop writing xxx

Peter

Great, and I'm only sorry to be so late reading this story. And,I chastise myself, I should have shown the appreciation I feel for the detail of the trials for so many of the Oragon Trail when I added a comment to Chapter 11. Well done!

Roger B

I have been reading this and the previous brothers thing the whole weekend.

"haremgirl" is really a great writer and I think she/he should try writing as real work, if that is not the case already

There stories are really awesome. What a good read

Excellent series. The fading out of the sex scenes in the later chapters is a bit frustrating.