All Comments on 'Train Ride'

How does she have blue eyes if she's Japanese? Enjoyed it, though.

.. but I loved the punchline.

Bit of a role reversal for Japanese train travel, but made an enjoyable story and left the opening for a sequel. Look forward to it. Thanks.

This could be a tantalizing start to more chapters. If you decide to write more, I'm looking forward to it.

BTW: It's not unheard of for people of Japan to have blue eyes. It's just not that common as darker eyes is all.

Simple but effective, can't wait for the following chapters... because there WILL be following chapters right ?

to his shock and amazement it is the bosses daughter.... yes I bet he had a memorable visit and returned many times after to keep the business on outstanding terms...