All Comments on 'Training Ch. 03'

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William smythWilliam smythover 13 years ago
Don't end it yet

This is a great series. Beuatifully written pornography. And the best part is the promise of more to cum. I hope Bonnie keeps it going.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
WOW , great stroke story ever Love how you tease us with Bonnie;s

training the young man to try and do her bidding. he will become one good man to fuck for any lady out there. Now she should bring in another woman to see how he has learned his lessons and have a three way!!!! Fuck the asses w/o names Bonnie we love how and what you write about.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Can I get some....

anal up in here!!! Great stories keep them going my Wife and I love this series!

Average_WriterAverage_Writerover 13 years ago
Not sure about the Anal thing.

But once again a very hot story thanks for writing this story.

Regards

AW

kureouskureousalmost 11 years ago
My name is Bobby

And while reading your story ... I felt a wet stop in my shorts!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Steaming pile of shit !

Just 1* !!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
5

made me cum with each chapter ! The asshole of LIT as you call him hates you! You know that and he will give you a 1 every time he sees your name next to a story. So because of that I gave you a 5

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
1* !!

This faggot with its prick fallen off think it can write !

Bah !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Foxterot7aFoxterot7a7 months ago

With grammatical corrections, use of proper English, and correct sentence structure, this story could be used as a teaching aide in a sexual education class or female/male sexual interactions/relations class.

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