All Comments on 'Training his Innocent Stepdaughter'

So sucking fucking hot, oh the lucky fucker. Cunt lapping sex maniac Lanc’s UK.

I would suggest NOT writing in present tense. It’s a painstaking way to develop a narrative and most writer fail - as you just did. Check out your tense tennis game in this paragraph:

"Such a good girl, letting me use your mouth like a fuckhole," Sam cooes, stroking her hair as he slams a particularly thrust into her tight wet throat. It felt fantastic. He looked down at her big, teary eyes that gazed adoringly up at him as her pink lips were stretched obscenely over his thick cock. She was moaning nonstop around his cock, the vibrations feeling fantastic as she pleasured herself by rubbing her wet cunt, playing with her swollen clit.”

My 9th grade grammar lesson complete, I’d like to suggest developing your characters quite a bit more. These aren’t humans - they’re badly photocopied stereotypes.

Meh..........

Wicked Sam, sweet little daughter, getting her knickers in a twist for her bad dad. But well worth the telling.

Have step daughter I desire… ok I need to use her body, more so use her sexy mouth to shove my hard cock into… like I do her mother,

I already use her used panties to get off in in her bed, got the view into her room and bathroom from outside during the evenings when her mother is traveling… what a tight body perking young firm titties and small nips… mercy