All Comments on 'Training Lolita'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
I'm on the end of my seat

Wondering what could happen next... knock on the door! Oh no, open that door!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
More

Is there a rating higher than 5 stars. You have left quite a bit of room for more chapters with additional young/teenage females. Looking forward to more of this story.

HM8485HM8485over 5 years ago
Great story with very good writing.

You write very well. I was a professional technical writer for over 30 years and tortuous prose combined with bad punctuation and misspellings cause my brain to grind to a halt, ruining my enjoyment. I am glad to see you on Literotica as the writers here show pride in their work and talents. I do read some things on other sites where this is not the case. I look forward to reading the rest of this novella! Thank you!

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You can ask me anything... I don't have to answer, but I usually will. I love the stories and the exchanges on here. Any suggestions to my stories are welcome. I'll listen to anything, even dribble since the delete button is so handy. I'm in my 60s now, stay in shape with biki...

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