All Comments on 'Training Tom Ch. 03: Humility Pt. 02'

This story is a wild ride! Id give 5 for originality and 5 for hotness but theres no 10 button!

LOVE THE WRITING.KEEP IT UP

Ah! No page 6! :( Lol Superb story and getting better and better breaking the limits of impossible. Just can't get enough of this story. I hope Sophie's run doesn't take very long!

This is my own selfish opinion but I just kept waiting if this chapter was going somewhere bigger with her huge burp. If it was going to expand on that with more huge burps or cause some sort new sensation on Tom. The same thing with Sophie's bladder with all the water she drank. It never came. Don't get me wrong, the small jabs of the things she did with the belch and the bathroom at the end were amazing. Thank you for your gift to us readers!

Wow

Ooooh! You left us with a cliffhanger!

Really well written. The best part about the quality of your writing is your ability to illustrate what’s happening rather than simply telling the reader. The sign of a polished writer!

Loved it. Great job.

I agree with licker. You have the right mix of words that catches my wild imagination. I liked the parallel situation of the phone call conversations and handling of Tom. Keep it up sub. 👍🏼

I'm absolutely addicted to this. It's everything I've ever wanted in a story. Or maybe even real life 🤷‍♂️

I am absolutely infatuated with these two stories. I've never had a fetish for taller women, but I think one has been born. And Sophie. I think I'm in love with her. This character feels so real to me. I feel like I can see her when I close my eyes, and I want to be her's. I've never had a story grab hold of me in this way. Amazing writing. I can't wait for the next chapter. I'll be checking daily. Until then, I'll reread.

It's been a month.Waiting for your update.

Write the next part please. We are dieing over here.

This series actually all your work is so good legit u have me checking every day for updates

Great story and writing. Looking forward to what's next.

your grasp of the English language and innuendo is unparalleled. Loving this series, can't wait for more!!

Writing a comment for first time.

Your writing is aweseome.

Please complete this series...

Waiting to see the how beautifully their mutual love blossoms

Thanks for your writings

there's just too much text in this one. Way too many descriptions and irrelevant paragraphs that takes your focus away from what's actually happening in the story. i gave up on page 2 coz it felt like there had been 20 lines of actual substance and 100 lines of nothing

Completely disagree with the last comment. Every sentence in this story is needed. It's what makes me, the reader, feel as if I was part of the story. Makes the story feel real eventhough is fantasy. The author of this series is one of the best writers I've ever had the pleasure of reading.