All Comments on 'TRANCE, Inc. 18'

by JCBeleren

Sort by:
  • 10 Comments
jskin78jskin78almost 4 years ago

Really love the series. But damn each chapter just leaves so many unanswered questions. Ugh

JCBelerenJCBelerenalmost 4 years agoAuthor

You can help me...

Hey! It's JC, and I'm here to ask for your professional support.

Have you enjoyed reading my web novels? Do they give you hours of entertainment? Then please consider supporting the artist who wrote them. :)

If each person who read all the way through one of my novels paid $3-6 (about the price of a bag of potato chips, and less than half the cost of a paperback book) then I would be able to continue writing indefinitely. As it is, my current trajectory will have me drastically cutting down on my writing volume within the next 6 months.

If you feel most comfortable with a one-time payment (like you'd make to purchase a novel in the bookstore) then please visit my Kofi page: https://ko-fi.com/jcbeleren

If you'd like to get early access to new chapters (up to a month before Literotica!) then you should check out my Patreon: https://www.patreon.com/jcbeleren

With much gratitude, respect and love,

JC

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Carmen and Daisy Nooo!

Wow did shit ever hit the fan! Gotta admit I was reading mostly for the twins but now the plot suddnely kicked into high gear.

I hope our hero gets everyone back. Potential personal triggers sounds intiguing ;)

Bigpat55Bigpat55almost 4 years ago

Holy cliffhanger batman, this is getting tantalizingly yet slow build to chance getting his mojo going to have enough moxie to take on the evil empire, i hope its nice view at the tip of this roller coaster

shootchuteshootchutealmost 4 years ago
crazy stuff

This is better than a wet dream haha. I love how everything is thought through and carefully planned. You write the book instead of the book writing you!

TSreaderTSreaderalmost 4 years ago
I like it...

I like it a lot! Very well done, and the ending of the chapter is awesome! Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Damn it!

Chance stepping up great!

Staking the odds against our hero, wonderfully done.

Daisy’s sacrifice heroic!

Would have loved for chance to beat the little shit to death, sigh

Victoria’s flip at the end, I should have seen coming.

A glimmer of hope there in the last moment really dug in the hook.

All that said, still a little pissed I’ve got to wait for the next installment.

greasedsilvergreasedsilveralmost 4 years ago

Oh good God, man, I can only beg you to conclude this story as it has me spell-bound and virtually on the edge of my seat wanting the answers. I have to get to the end and I am having to wait on you!

Please, get to the closure, before I go completely insane.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Another great chapter

The parent corporation is still a step ahead of Chance, but he's catching up. I see why you had to leave the Bimbo Builder Academy, the time lines were getting too far out of sync. Hot as hell, cannot wait to see where you go next.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Nice! I love it when the dots are connected. [Joseph] Clayton finally shows up.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous
userJCBeleren@JCBeleren
Hi! JC here, Thanks for checking out my bio. :) I’m really pleased you stopped by (hopefully after reading and enjoying one of my novels or short stories). If you’re just browsing, here are some places you might want to check out: Want access to early chapters, regular proje...

READ MORE OF THIS SERIES

TRANCE, Inc. 17 Previous Part
TRANCE, Inc Series Info