All Comments on 'Tranned Out - The Beginning'

Beautiful story. Well done.

Liked your story! But find it a difficult to believe some guy in that short of amount of time could pass as an attractive female. Otherwise good story, will it continue?

Enjoyed the story. I'd like to hear more about Jordan's journey.

One editorial comment, it would help the readability if your paragraphs were shorter. I got lost in some of the longer ones a few times.

great story i hope there is more to come

great story but babe what is that title hahaha. not tranned out!!!!

I really enjoyed it. More please. A part 2 would be cool too.

Amazing story. Well written and very sexy. I need friend like Jordan.