All Comments on 'Transformation Ch. 11'

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been reading this story since the beginning

Really enjoying this series. Please keep more chapters coming

I read all the eleven parts in a row and I'm absolutely curious about the next parts.

Thank you for this!

I like your erotica, but I really hate Gandalf. Gandalf is an evil guy. I just like to read on. So what happens until Gandalf's program breaks off if Sara chooses Tiffany, not Rob? She must think. I hope, she chooses Tiffany.

Well, you got me hooked. I read every chapter in just over a week. I'm looking forward to more from you.

Absolutely cannot wait for more! Stop writing other stories and finish this one please Chromex! There is no competition, this piece has it ALL!!!!

The story, the characters all very well written can't wait to read more!!!!

Not sure but did he say 'Got you now Rick' on page 2? Just before he threw he into the water. Had a little problem realizing that he had got to San Diego to get he until I went back and read it again.

Just wow