All Comments on 'Transformation Vignette Pt. 01'

Unexpected, not so where you are going with this.

You’re going to expand on this...

It occurred to me after I submitted this story that those reading it are likely unfamiliar with my earlier Transformation series and as such this won't make a lot of sense or be as impactful as intended standing on its own. I do hope you take the time to read my earlier works and are able to enjoy this story in its proper context.

Read your whole Transformation story. I was a bit confused by Tiffany still having blond hair. I remember you writing Sara was immortal, but Tiffany had nothing done to her from Gandalf. Did I miss something?

I got such enjoyment from every chapter you wrote in Transformation that I was happily surprised that you wrote this vignette. You have a great talent for bringing characters to life while telling fascinating stories.

I hope you continue your writing of this and other stories because I believe it would be a loss if you do not.

Thanks again taking the time to bring this excellent story to us.

J.D.

Waiting for me. Loved and loved and loved ur transformation series. Dont stop this new series here

Just fucking WOW. I remember Them being told that tiffany would live her life as long as Sara. That the were tied together. Now since Sara became immortal, then Tiff would be as well. I hated them being split up, they were my favorite couple. Nicely played, an amazing story

I really hope you continue this series. I would love to see where Sara's and Tiffany's stories go.

Great start to the story. I can not wait to see where it leads/goes. I also very much hope it conntinues, as is evidenced by my senteces earlier.

Please continue

I’ve read this from start to finish and loved it almost throughout (rape unnecessary imho), and having read a few transformation stories, this one really stands out for me. What I am missing is Vignette No2, Sara’s end story, hopefully an end of days story of the grand kind, illustrating how Sara & Tiff have been changed by immortality, maybe even reunited, who knows, anyway - pretty please with an anal cherry on top, can I have my other vignette now?

I feel like Sara and Tiffany were close enough that they’d have reconnected over the tragedy of Robert’s death.

i expected tff to be alive but really curious about what happened to sara

I’m assuming that the fact that Tiffany was addressed as “Ms Riley” by her aide means that she married Sara at some point.

I have read all the parts and I really enjoyed them. But you are letting us hang now in the dark. It is called vignette pt.1 so I assume that their will be more parts coming. I do hope so. I love your writing.