All Comments on 'Transforming My Religious Mom'

Waaaaaaay too much talk

excellent story, looking forward mums further worship.

Stories like these are so unbelievably stupid. Something a 15 year old would write. You had one chance to introduce your stories to the millions of Lit readers and you fucked it up. I'll make sure I never look at another of your submissions should there be any. Hopefully not. This was deserving of less than a one.

A pretty good story, even if it is totally fictional. I hope you will add additional chapters for us to read.

gostei parabém! por favor não continue esta historia, iria estragar algo ótimo

You could improve some by less dialog. Keep working toward better stories.

Way too vulgar, and nobody is that fucking stupid..............

UNBELIEVEABLY HOT !!!!

disgustings fantastic and hence good stroke story

Really enjoyed it. Great first story. Work on toning it down juuust a little to improve the plausible realism. All too often authors start at 10, and then it spirals off into unbelievable silliness. Or it becomes a series of boxes to check: oral, anal, PIV, pegging, one guy, two guys, Grandma, grandpa, the bridge club, pimping, bukkake, etc. Look to authors like TheTalkMan, klrxo, relaxwouldya, nik314, and MountainDewMan as examples of how to maintain interest in a series. The key is maintaining the tension, between the Id and the superego. Good luck, look forward to the next chapter!

Sorry but I loved this, if you want realism and believability read 50 shades for god sakes.

Mom you get a 10/10 from me. yes she is dumb as a bag of rocks but who cares, its called 'fantasy' writing for a reason.

Loved it. Loved the build up and the teasing. I just wish the finale was longer but I’m looking forward to reading your next work. Hopefully it’s something similar.

I don't know why but her calling him daddy was fucking hot we need more stories where the mom does that and the sisters to !

Expecting Sequel to this ......Where he breeds her.........Super man.......

Keep up the good work

totally a work of fiction and you can tell which is why i gave it only 2 stars

Wonderful story. What a great mom and son story. But she needed to be bred badly. Keep up the good work will be watching for more from you.

More chapters please thanks very much you handsome piece of cake in a warm oven on a hot summer day

Great job from the big fitted little cumslut. She is a lonely woman in need of a man to guide her.like a good little vodka idling whore for her man. So we need more to the story.Get busy