by GatorRick
you are not very good with numbers.
"We're going to have twins in about six months. I'm three months along and the doctor said they are both doing just fine."
so at this point she is 3 months along with twins, but this is followed by
"I received word from my doctor's office confirming his initial diagnosis. The tests indicated I was pregnant. Rick and I would be parents in just about seven months."
I guess the sonogram was enough to confirm twins, but not a pregnancy?
oh well, that is about as credible as this sorry saga is.
let us prey
I love your stories.
Heartfelt, emotional, and happy endings.
Very good writing, please keep at it.
Thanks for sharing!
Have you ever written anything and posted it to this site? Until you do, why don't you lighten up on your comments?
I enjoy your stories and that was sure one of the really good ones. Thanks for writing it
Shows the need to communicate with each other. Sometimes innocent things occur that look guilty from another point of view.
Sure hope Rick has a chain saw. Enjoyed your story. Good writing too. Cheers!
You write well even if you do put ten month babies in the tale. You mean she spent almost three months without noticing she was pregnant? Oh well, the tale was quite enjoyable.
Not too shabby! Please finish the story of the two babies born healthy! Mother and babies all ok. That's the ending i love..... Love you all! Bye. Greg oh 10 stars
We all jump to conclusions. Sometimes it is best that we all take our spouses away from the daily grind if for no other reason but to reconnect. Thanks for the reminders we ALL jump for the wrong reasons.
What's the saying?"When you assume,you make an ASS out of U and ME"!
Well it certainly looked bad but, love won out!
A 5+ for this one!
I HATE Literotica's voting system. I tried to click on 5 Stars but it didn't grab right away and as I swiped my mouse away it clicked on 3 Stars.
C'MON MAN LITEROTICA fix this shit system. It's happened more than once to me and I am sure I am not the only one this has happened to.
C'MON MAN, GatorRick is one of the top 10 authors on here and deserves the good stuff.
I hesitate to critquie anyone's stories because I lack the courage to write my own. I must say that your stories keep my interest and in my opinion you are very imaginative. After reading all you wrote on this site I think you have a problem ending your stories, they all seem to stop too abruptly and leave too many loose ends. Please keep writing.
This is one of my favourite stories on literotica. There are so many even in romance what starts out with a loss of love. Romance that starts early grow strong and even with little trouble finds happiness is just fun. Thank you so much for taking the time to share your talent
What a great plot. Your intro kept me from closing this down. The LW genre so often Lea es me with a tight chest. Thanks for taking the time to share your talents.
Dp
Another great love story by the master, in this case it goes to show that things are not always what they look like and in this case it wasn't. Well done 5++ stars
RICK WAS NOT A JERK, TERRI WAS A BITCH FOR HER BEHAVIOUR AND HOW SHE TREATED HER WEAK WIMPY HUSBAND
Terri was nasty bitch to him for months, not an overnight thing so he was too quick to forgive the bitch
I like this story but go back and read the dialogue when they were kids, it's absurd. Did you forget they we're suppose to be middle school kids and not 54 year old therapists?
Good story, but once again, the inconsistencies throw me off. Firstly, she's 3 months along and due in 6 months. At the end, a week or so later, the Dr. confirmed she's 2 months along and due in 7 months... 3 Stars ⭐⭐⭐ once again.