All Comments on 'Trapped in a Game Pt. 03'

Phew! It's finally done. Chapter 4 has been completed and submitted to Literotica. They usually take about 3-5 days to get it up, so if you're still along for the ride look out for it then. :)

Thanks for uploading part 4! Been waiting a long time and can't wait to read it!

Fuck this being an erotica. The fight against the Master Vampire and his thralls, as well as healing Serra beats anything that I read on this site the pass several months!

Thanks for the details, action, and emotion. Really great.

This. Freaking. Story. Dood.

The story as a whole is an enthralling joy to read. The setting is a genius spin on SAO’s arc1 but that aside, Trapped in a Game is a fresh and addicting piece of work!!

Every chapter has been superb, but Part 03 blew its’ predecessors out of the water. The three characters are meticulously constructed and refined through your writing. That hard work truly shines as each character’s own values and desires are tested in the later portion of Pt. 03. By weathering each test, the characters become that much more developed as individuals.

Such a delightful experience ^ ^

I really hope Serra gets a happy ending and doesn't end up just getting sidelined. She deserves someone who loves her too.

Ahh man, that fight! I was enthralled (if you'll pardon the pun) and the climax with the healing spell got me out of my chair!