All Comments on 'Travelling Together'

Lovely, elegant writing. A tasty little treat, well told. Simple writing is often the best:

- "Come inside me. Fuck me, fill me up," she said simply.

Reminds me of a time, years ago, when my girlfriend and I gave ourselves the treat of a sleeper on the Sydney - Tenterfield night train...

He should have just pushed is cock in as deep as it would go and shot his cum deep up inside her unprotected pussy

This is story land no VD or babies

Thanks electricblue for the compliments (but I should admit, I don't have much control over my style, the stories seem to write themselves).

And Anon, I'm sorry but my characters need to show respect to each other, & at least a trace of responsibility!

Sweet.

I loved the details. You draw great pictures without being overly wordy.

A nice storyline and good descriptive usage, but the whole story was soured by the lack of knowledge of the actual layout of Australian geography. Too many details were inaccurate - and I live in South Africa!

Thanks for the comment. It's funny you should find fault in the geography, because its correct (except for a slight exaggeration with the Stockton ferry). I've ridden all the rail journeys mentioned, including with a lover on the overnight train. I recommend it!