All Comments on 'Trawling Atlantis'

Thank you, I read the original story and loved it. I love this version even more and will read it again one day. I hope you will keep writing stories like this one. I just love a great sibling romance with babies.

You DID write a nice story. Atta boy!

Thank you so much for this amazing story ! <3

The part where Alexa asked for her brother in the pub.. she telling her name "I am Alexa" and everybody went silent, that part really got me.. damn.. had some tears !

10/5

Wow, what a good story. I had a tear in my eye the first time I read this and this time was no different. A fantastic way to spend a few hours during covid lockdown. Thank you for sharing your writing with us.

I think in your original version of this story, the breaking up over phone part was better, just flows more naturally. Interrupting the important moment to make that call seemed too odd. The other thing is, the father character seems somehow cartoonish. I mean, before they got caught, there really wasn’t anything suggesting that Chris and his dad had an particular bad relationship. Yet the dad treat them so differently after he caught them.

Still, This is a great story, all of the above are just my personal opinion.

Also, Is there any chance that you repost and finish your haram series?

Great story, thanks so much for your hard work.

Well done

One of the few authors in this genre that actually understand the intricacies and complexities associated with incest. I look forward to more repostings and am glad you're back to publishing on this site. 5*

So reading this is story puts me up to date with everything you’ve published under this name. Each is brilliant, well built story lines, I hope you continue to publish. Bravo!

Lovely romantic story of love lost and found again.

Scores a well deserved 5/5

If you have other stories from a previous account, please continue publishing then. You are talented.

Overall a beautiful story of tragedy, love, and devotion.

Loved the multiple incest coupling .

A good ending to a family history.

How about another generation?

An interesting story of love, devotion, and lost love.

Great story.

Loved the way you had his sister and lover traveled over to find Chris.

The ending was not a complete surprise, but a beautiful one.

Had read the original version and agree that the edit is more in keeping with his character.

Looking forward to reading more & hope you continue reloading your existing work.

This very nice story was originally posted under f1manoz. Is this the same author?

-MM

Great , great story. Love it. AAAAAA+++++

Nicely written, well done.

Beautiful love story and I wish I could give it more than five stars.

Shame you can't give a 10!

Great story!! All of yours are.

Is there a separate story about the twins? Would rlly love to read it

Brilliant story, i loved it the first time i read the original.

I would vote higher if that was possible, you write some excellent stuff.

An outstanding story and well worth a reread! Although I caught a few grammatical errors (not sure if they're due to the differences in King's English and American bastardization), but overall a good long read, worth cuddling up in front of a fire to. 5 stars! Can't wait to read the rest of your stories.

Oh god you made a grown man cry, more than once throughout the narrative! I'm still blinking away tears just so I can see straight to type this. Thank you for a beautiful love story and a wonderfully emotional experience. I'm tempted to show this to my girlfriend because, although I haven't yet told her about Literotica, I know that if it made me cry, it'll have her in floods.

Great story and it went places I didn't think it would. Definitely brought some tears to this blokes eyes. Very hot and well written. Thanks

Well everything except the anal crap.

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I have read all your posted stories. I may be mistaken as I only read incest, but, to my limited knowledge, you may have the highest rating of any author in Lit. If not, you should be. Cannot wait for your next offering. I always give you 5 stars!

Very good story. Thanks. And if you’ve never had your ashes hauled on a yacht you should try it.

THEIR FATHER WAS AN UNCOUTH SICK BASTARD!!

What an absolutely marvelous story!!!! Well done!!

THE FATHER WAS A BASTARD. THE MOTHER DESERVED THE SHIT HE GAVE HER!!

WOULD HAVE BEEN PERFECT WITHOUT HAVING THEIR CHILDREN WALK THE SAME PATH!! THAT WAS UNNECESSARY AND STUPID,OTHERWISE GREAT STORY

Another amazing story. Beautiful and touching.

The sort of theme with a huge thumbs down for morality BUT a great story weaving through the hurdles and obstacles of choices made. Most intriguing read. Good job author!

A truly wonderful story. Thank you.

Ok, this is the first story that I’ve read of yours and I’d have to say that this was a really good read.

The siblings are written well for the most part and they feel like actual siblings that feel in love with each other

I also like that you decided to show the 10 year time gap from the perspectives of both the characters as that definitely helps in making the readers feel the despair of the situation even more and let’s us know what both of the siblings are going through

though I do feel like you should’ve spent a little bit more time in building the past of the siblings and wished we got to actually see how close they were instead of just through stories of their past which told us that they’re close

and the story also gets through the 10 year gap really fast and…as impactful the divide was between the siblings and as impactful the reaction from the father was, it was solved too quickly imo

and the last page with their children also doing the same was completely unnecessary as their responses to being found out was so unrealistic and i found it quite cringey

but overall a good read. keep up the good work.

Superbly brilliant. Absolutely perfect. 5/5 stars ✨ forever will be one of my top stories ever

(3/30/2023) Well, you did it. You made me cry. This was a well written love story. The discussion regarding the increased possibilities of genetic defects was spot on. Although you may have taken the taboo a bit too far with the next generation, IMO. There really was no need for it. Still, Five stars from me.

Exceptional story. 5 stars.

Loved the story. Specifics; the emphasis on the love between Chris and Alexa, the drama within the extended family, the big emotional scenes, and the legacy of incest continuing to the next generation. Minor nitpicks were grammatical and a personal wish for certain sections to be explored more fully. All in all... loved it. 5/5*

Very glad the children of their incestuous relationship were normal. A very well thought out and written story. I definitely look forward to reading more of your work. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

Very well told

I remember reading this story a few years ago. It appears to have some major editing. It is still a great 4+ star story.

Enjoyed every minute of reading and re-reading. Great story

5 for 5. A great story excellently told. Actually had me in tears at several points. Would only have changed one thing from personal opinion and not to take away from the story at all. Would have only had two of the kids get together instead of all four, but with all four in full understanding and support of it all.

I love your stories. Or atleast the ones I've read. And I have a sneaky suspicion that there's an incestuous harem version of Outback on your computer (where the MC hooks up with both his sister and daughter as well, maybe even her wife).

But as far as this story goes, my only gripe would be the children (particularly Lewis and Isla) not having children of their own, who then have incestuous children.

Ugh stories that start like that always annoy me even though they tend to have happy endings. They frustrate the crap out of me though because of how it all plays out, all that pain and heartache and lost time. I just wish certain aspects weren't quite as infuriating, but I understand why they are as they are. I really liked the flashback from both perspectives. It made me appreciate exactly what they went through a lot more.

This isn't the first story where a parent's overreaction (it's always the dad) causes the son to leave. The guy was acting like a damn animal. And like Chris thought, I wouldn't be surprised if he did secretly long for his daughter, which only fueled his rage. I would have just stayed and took my chances to be honest and found a way to talk to Alexa. Fuck that guy - I'm glad she despised him until the end after that. I'd believe that she would support me against any claims of rape and what not. But I guess that wouldn't make for a good story now, would it? ;) Someone else already pointed out that if they really did love each other, they would have fought against all this shit and found a way to be together. Love conquers all, anyone?

Anyway, the story was good but damn if it wasn't heartbreaking and frustrating. When she finally found him and they reunited, it was like a scene from a romance film or something when lovers finally reunite after being apart for so long. I'll admit, there were some tears, but that's part of why I love these stories. You really conveyed their deep desire and need for each other well. I can even (very begrudgingly) overlook the random boyfriend and random girls they hooked up with during their long time apart though honestly I think it would have been more special if there had been none, even in such a long time frame; for me I just wouldn't have seen the point when my heart belongs to someone else, but everyone's different I guess.

The mother getting cancer was brutal. Did you really have to pile that on? As if there wasn't enough sadness. Tugging at the heartstrings like mad with this one. At least they got to say their goodbyes and she got everything off her chest, but damn, I wish it had been the fucking dad instead. Of course, life is rarely, if ever, fair.

The ending was nice. I love how their kids were also in love just like how they were. That was a nice touch. OK, maybe a bit too far some might say, but I don't know, I just personally find any loving brother/sister relationship like portrayed here to be really damn beautiful. Anyway, top-notch story 5/5

Amazing story. Loved reading every chapter of it. One of the best ones I have read so far.

It’s hard to read the first part, but I love how much you help us really feel what they felt, how much they suffered & held onto hope, and truly valued every single moment they had together once they were reunited (spoiler! 😉). Love this one too. Huge fan of your work.

Great read!