All Comments on 'TRC - Last Name Pt. 02'

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jpz007ahrenjpz007ahrenover 3 years ago
Good ole Dwarvish engineering

I held out hope, and thankfully so did she. Jemma did a lot I imagine to rekindle that spark of life. Good on her. Having a reflex response doesn't define a person if they've had no exposure to a thing. Making choices afterwards does.

Got himself too drunk to hold it in, eh? With experiences like his, I imagine needing to get that drunk, at least on occasion. Chase away the bad memories, bathe in some good ones. Worked out better than could be expected.

Glad to see another snippet from Naden. Sure, he's a scoundrel, but he feels too. Not being able to add another burden of pain on oneself isn't wrong. Now though, he's living it up. Happy for a happy end. >.> xD

Yeah though... smithing nerves into the metal. Uhh... yeah. I don't even want to imagine, imagining something like that. Its hard to even really think about how to do it in a way that wouldn't cause a reaction like that, you know? Of course, now I chuckle to myself and imagine a particularly crazy dwarf grafting some extra arms on his back. Not regular, tri-jointed arms though, oh no. Limbs like a snake, a squid... or maybe an-

Thanks for the story. Lovely to read "small" contained little stories alongside the epics. Oh and also good luck with getting the "Also in This Series" to properly correlate this trilogy. I've not delved into it myself, but It seems the automated one really likes it when the names are all the same. ^.^ Be well.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

A wonderful tale full of adventure, intrigue, revenge and of course sex. What more could you ask for in a story about an adventurers realm? A Fiver from me.

Agent X

skippersdadskippersdadover 3 years ago

loved it always look forward to more .

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Excellent story, and a wonderful addition to the TRC world. I thoroughly enjoyed Devlin's tale. Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Great story, now go save kal's sweetie

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Awesome story, would be cool to incorporate it in with the rest of your trc story line.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Short but sweet. Excellent

Richard1940Richard1940almost 2 years ago

A very interesting diversion from the main story line

Rhino77PIlotRhino77PIlot4 months ago

The light at the end of the tale

Illuminates the beginning of the Stormhammer Dynasty.

And fades to darkness as the tale of Sir Devlin And Maris,

Conquering the world begins....

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Lord of the Glass Desert - Chapter 40 has been submitted! Chapter 40 was flagged as AI Generated and sent back. I've recently begun using Chat GPT to help with grammar and punctuation. I do not let it add or make changes to my story aside from these two things, Admittedly, it...

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