All Comments on 'TRC - Lord of the Glass Desert Ch. 14'

"Melir grabbed Rhim's hair and held her in place as he began shooting his seed into her mouth." Isn't she an antelope girl? Who has horns? So why go for the hair when she comes already equipped with handles? Shouldn't EVERY woman come equipped with handles on top of her head?

Oh yes very good

["We weren't in the caravan," said Chaldi as she stared after the mage and cat, "but we heard about it when picking up our goods and saw one of the sandworms when we crossed over to this side years ago."]

Years? How long has Kal been away?

@ZZchromosome O.O ... I feel like a failure as a fantasy erotica writer for missing that opportunity. XD

@Anon Chaldi and Soonu saw a sandworm when they crossed the desert years ago, they aren't saying they saw the one Kal and Kashka killed.

Liked the chapter. Was a little surprised the gnolls fought to the death. Is there a major physical difference between the hyena-girls and the gnolls? Like are gnolls still ugly, and stupid, or was it just this band? Are Hyena-girls like good looking, not stupid, brutish, gnolls?

@Dramyth

Yes there is a difference between Gnolls and hyena monster girls. Gnolls are the female version of the DnD Gnoll (perhaps a bit larger and stronger than in the Monstrous Compendium. Back when I played we mostly did "Super" campaigns and they had to be a bit more badass to be a challenge).

Hyena monster girls follow the canid-monstergirl mold (human but with canine features like Daxas and her pack) but with the added equipment, a serious dominant streak, disdain for males, and a bite that can break bones.

great!!

Thanks for the reply, that clarifies things!

Can Kal make that much of a difference to the monster girls and humans interactions?

@BluDragyn how much are you planning to write of these books? Is there going to be a 4th book or something? I'm so invested and if these got published as physical books I would 100% buy them

Liked it.