All Comments on 'TRC - Lord of the Glass Desert Ch. 16'

Yes. "Come into my magical tent," said the magician to the spider, "There's no way it could trap you inside it. You're safe with me, stranger."

-- Lovely chapter. Glad we won't have to slog through a troop of ape-women, though there may yet be an encounter. Live long and prosper Anika- you spooder girls get the short end of the proverbial stick lots of times.

-- Thank you very much for your story. You and yours Be well, and looking forward to your next installment. ^.^

Excited for more

Thanks for the wonderful story. Excited they finally bonded. Also glad to see a nice spider girl. Looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks and keep being awesome!

This just keeps getting better and more interesting. Your varied use of zoology and it’s possibilities serves you incredibly well in your story creation and character abilities. Thank you for taking the time to create and post these chapters.

J.D.

Interesting chapter. So another monster girl appears and others flee.

We have waited so long for a cliffhanger yet again…. Love the story and even though the curiosity burns me to the core I’m willing to wait for quality.

nice job.but i wont more.

Loved it

Tarantulas rule. The coloration depiction had me giddy.

Enjoy the way Kal wants to interact with these misunderstood humanoids

Echoing comments from others, and myself, tale gets more interesting by the chapter.

Keep up the great work!