All Comments on 'Treasure Ch. 11-14'

Well PW you don't hold back do you!! It's okay I don't mind I am tough and all the trouble adds to the story and makes the better times all the sweeter I reckon. Nice curve ball with Treasure being a lost princess. As always I look forward to reading more

And would be if you did not lift ideas from other writers.

i lost interest after 2nd part but kept hope so i read the 3rd part. lets give the justice, give back the right and justice to the princess and punishment & elimination for that criminal & his nasty pack to restore the order. again keeping hope to you

Another good start to a story. Full of action and very realistic, within the 'werewolf universe'. As to the comment by "Anonymous"... I have read most of the stories on Literotica, within the werewolf genre, to the point where I have to search hard to find even abandoned and unfinished stories There are only so many basic themes to be had under the double constraint of 'werewolf' 'romance' stories. One is forced to rehash basic themes. The art is in the meat that you put on the bones of the story. This one seems damned good, so far. In as much as there seems to be some resolution to the problem of the 'bad guys', this early in the story, I suspect that this story is going to follow a path that takes it far from its beginning. Onward, PartWolf!

PN

To whom it may concern:

The genre is limited, to say the least. What makes each story different is the way the author puts meat on the bare bones of a story. It is what will grab the attention of the reader and hold them until the end of the book. I am a heavy reader in the werewolf genre as well as vampires, elves and dragons. And each has the basics with a twist here and there. What makes Partwolf worth the time to read are the curve balls and sudden 180 degree turn abouts... I love that in a story. Keep writing. I will keep reading. :)

ok instead of complaining would you care to give a few examples of unique plot line that have NEVER been used in any kind of story about were? odds are you can't since that idea is impossible.

Who cares? I love the story and hope there will be many more chapters. Taking someone's idea and twisting it to make your own story works for me. Keep up the good writing partwolf and I'll keep reading.

I have read quite a few stories and although there may be some similarities with the genres, they are very different and particular to the writer. I for one am very drawn into the characters and adventures if you will of "Partwolf". This author's style of writing and unique creativity has my imigination right there along with every word as if it were unfolding right before me or if I were a part of it. There are a couple of other authors from this site and some others that have this same affect for me as well. When authors can do that to you , it is difficult to find fault in their work. I believe Partwolf is an excellent author and will continue to read and follow no matter where or when its written. Thank you for my destressing time after my 13hr shift. Can't wait until the next chapter!!😊😊😊😊

First I want to say I enjoy your stories. Some on here think you steal ideas, while I see some similarities, I do not think you have "stolen" anything.

I did find a few things that I would change...like her IV being unhooked for her to be taken for some scan (they would just take the IV with them). Also when it talks about giving her a painkiller (a pill), they would just inject it into her IV she would not be able to open her mouth to swallow it since she had a broken jaw and it was surgically wired shut.

I find this like all your other stories very good and hope you think about getting some of them published because with a bit of work on grammar and editing your stories are worth publishing

Really starting to get somewhere now. Well at least the Council is aware and taking steps so perhaps Rea will get out of the mental hospital but I think she'll have to escape and wreak her own vengeance.

Most of us read non-human or Sci-fi/Fantasy as escapism, we like to think there’s the possibility of a better place, where our flawed world and the sad weak people in it might not be the peak of evolution, at the moment though I’m glad I live in a mundane world where characters like Todd Blackstone don’t exist. It wouldn’t hurt the storyline to have a bit of sunshine instead of incessant, depressing misery. Jus’ sayin’… 4⭐️