Tribal Bonds Ch. 02

"It was lovely," Gul panted, her voice sounding small. I made her out only as a shadow before the fire. The anxiety built like a crescendo, a polar opposite to the pleasure I'd felt just a few moments before.

"A fitting reward for a warrior of the Hayalet," I heard Orospu say. Just barely heard it as my other senses began to fail.

I was barely conscious now, and I was surprised by how fast it was going. I didn't know if I was dying or fainting. Part of me hoped I was dying, as Buz should be ashamed to faint. Regardless, I knew that I was still conscious, because Orospu's last words kept bouncing back and forth in my mind Warrior of Hayalet. I knew that meant something, but my fuzzy brain could not remember.

The fire disappeared from my vision and everything was just the fuzzy blackness that had grown out the corners of my vision. I couldn't hear or smell of feel anything either. Just those words.

Hayalet.

And then it dawned on me.

The lost civilization. Destroyed by their stronger neighbors. All dead and gone. But haunting the valley. The panic stayed with me.

My last thought before I returned to the darkness: I was right at first. I am surrounded by ghosts!

End Chapter 2.

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