All Comments on 'Tricked into Treats'

Seriously I loved this, you've left me sopping wet, thanks.

I just read the first few paragraphs and was bored. Needs to be more discriptive so people can feel like they are person/people and in the suroundings.

I'm not a fan of piss-play or condoms, but it was very well written. A little slow to start, and the set-up of the part and her friends could have been better, but when the couple finally get physical it's good.