All Comments on 'Tricked Then Treated'

by JackKing

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AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
The hottest series ever!!!!

I've seen these stories before. Please tell me that you will continue it farther than before. The detail of the characters and there interactions is spectacular. There is no mastermind in these stories (well maybe beth) the people wind up in ever more compromising situations through their own desires accidentaly being realized.

AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
Wow

That was an awesome story. Absolutely brilliant.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
So. Hot.

That was amazing. Although I felt that it should've lasted longer. I'm always such a sucker for stories when someone just *snaps* and loses control out of lust. Then there's stories with women seducing younger males and younger girls seducing men, both of which turn me on unbelievably. Reading a story like yours that incorporates both of these things... my reaction went off the charts! Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
More!

Very good story. I especially liked the fact that all the action was "hidden in plain sight"!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
fuckin amazin

this is the best story i've red on literotica in my life, and i've been readin for over 8 months, nothin was as good

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Best Story In Literotica

Believe or not, This is the best story in the entire site. The way the plot developes and slowly builds up... My God..

Wish to read more from the author

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
I loved it ( can you call me later? )

I love a good tease. If I could wright a story I would tell a tale of my early daze. rikengine.at

john_glenn95820john_glenn95820over 16 years ago
All of JackKing's stories

I couldn't stop reading from the very first story to the last. Very good reading, loved every word. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
just fantastk story

the best story i have ever read it was fantasik. had me going all the way thru the whole story. wish there was more chapters . would even like to see him fuck that older lady.

keep it up

wrighterwrighterover 15 years ago
monster in me

amazing i liked the story cant wait to do it myself.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
You're writing again

Loved this story. Maybe some more adventures for the wifey?

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

That was your best story yet

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Haha!!

This story is hilarious! Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
PLEASE KEEP THIS STORY GOING..

Best story by the best author.. It would be incredibly satisfying if you could expand this story into a mini series. Adding an oral scene between them like Chpt 14 experienced by Ron.

some suggestions or creative assisted scene ideas-

Christmas party

Locker room/club gym

More Halloween party

Club pool

ProfDavrosProfDavrosabout 11 years ago
What has 4 arms 5 legs and 2 heads....

A great tease story. It made me wish I'd been asked.

Especially nice to have the action happen but hidden in public.

More please.

Exhibitionist_LoverExhibitionist_Loverover 9 years ago
Another incredibly hot story

Wow, do you know how to make a hot fantasy cum to life! Incredibly hot...touches on so many powerful themes, teenaged boys lust for sexy older women, older women's desires to be wanted and lusted after, and the powerful voyeuristic pleasure of hearing about a successful seduction plan. 5*'s ++ again!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Very nice! One minor edit suggestion:

Will stepped back, managing to conceal he [HIS] already growing erections, and admired their outfit.

Rednails120whiteRednails120white13 days ago

Great story. Detailed and fun. Jessie sounds like she resembles the women golfer Paige Spiranac. 5 stars.

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