All Comments on 'Trigger-Happy Girl Hunt Ch. 01'

A fresh take on a great subject and also hilarious and hot. I can’t wait for more!

Confused on which mistress is which mistress. With Emily the lines with 'Mistress this' and 'Mistress that' were confusing. Chloe was supposed to call Morgan as Morgan but the Morgan character changed to Mistress too many times. If Morgan and Chloe spend too much time with each name they may not get through the list. We don't know how many there are but Morgan needs to visit all of them within 24 hours or she may become a slave to someone else. I can see a lot of potential with a harem of slaves and the adventures that they would be forced to endure once Morgan finds her mojo and takes charge.

And a bit yummy too! Thank you!

Great - but you should make the sex much sexier. Don't just summarize it to a paragraph, please make it an important and delicious experience.

Nice start please continue it's refreshing opining chapter.

It’s good you just wonder a bit before you get to the point