All Comments on 'Triggered Obsession'

Your story has promise, I'd like to see where it goes. Couple of grammatical errors here and there, but it doesn't detract from the story.

I'd love to read more.

Would like to read more!

Great start. Please keep going.

I enjoyed the start of the story I can’t wait to read more

Please continue this story. It’s absolutely amazing and leaves you wanting more. I have just one request. Could you make the parts longer? Thank you! Chu~❤️

This seems like a story which can be very hot. Do post more

I didn't expect the response to be so positive! I realize it has errors, if you knew the HELL it was to get this past the moderator though... I was almost entirely jaded and gave up on it all after a bit. So I'm so excited it's published now and you've all enjoyed it this far! I warn you it will get dark... but, that's where it always goes before people heal from trauma.

Which was my point in finally writing and submitting!

I'll get Ch. 2 up asap and keep working on the rest of Wuinn and Raydens tale! Thank you all!

♡ Quinn!

I am so glad lit finally published!! Wheres more!?!? Ugh waiting is the worst. Great character development.

I couldn’t really get into the story because of numerous grammatical errors and run on sentences. Finally gave a couple paragraphs in.

Please get an editor.

Thank you all for the feedback, I do have Chapters 2 and 3 written, but am trying to get editing done asap. I run them through Google doc & other writing programs but seemi to get hung up with the run on sentences and grammar some of you mentioned. I try to be precise about that, but obviously have been out of writing too long and forgot some key things to creating a story dialogue that isn't wordy or just plain painful to read in some ways! Thank you all SO much for the comments and votes for my first chapter. I never thought Quinn and Rayden would be loved so much right off the bat! And it means the world to me!!! You have no idea! I'll let you know once I'm able to submit and hopefully the wait won't be too long now!

XoXo! ~Quinn

I’m enjoying this so far ! Can’t wait for the next release .

I just submitted chapters 2 & 3 now! Hopefully they'll be published soon!

XoXo~Quinn