All Comments on 'Trip to Chicago'

Great first time story. I'd sure like another chapter where Dana pays him back, and finds she likes giving him a blowjob. Five stars.

Please continue this wonderful loving story.

We now know about the first night, but what about the second? Great story about two compatible lovers. Only problem was that there's more to tell. Loved it.

This is outstanding as you have it,BUT it screams for a part two.

Great as always

Woodbgood

Lawyers generally do not travel very much, they get a ticket to practice in a given state and they don't easily or quickly transfer. They have to spend their spare time trying to drum up business in their home area because they are not on salary but are paid only when they are doing what somebody is paying them for.

Saying "international lawyer" really does not change it, you may know rules for several nations, but again, to practice, the state issues the permit that lets you practice, and most folks who write the laws limit practice to their own citizens for obvious reasons.

Yes, I know there are exceptions made for exceptional busy people who don't have time to fool around.

EO

Corporate attorneys do business in all states as well as other countries.

I not sure where Anonymous got the information published above but it is not correct. I am a lawyer who has practiced more than half of the states in this country. I routinely had between 125,000 and 150,000 frequent flyer miles yearly, and over my career I have amassed more than 2 million frequent flyer miles on one airline alone. I also in the highest reward category for an international hotel chain that comes with its own rewards. Unfortunately, I have never been as lucky has David was in this excellent story. Looking forward to more.

Don’t get me wrong, I think this is a fantastically constructed story, but why do I feel like I’m reading a pamphlet any time the hotel is mentioned?

Really good, right up my fetish of small chested women and they are more sensitive, which is a great turn-on!!

From someone who rareIy comments, I feel this is a wonderful story.

For the “Anonymous” complainers I have 2 suggestions; #1: Grow a pair and quit being anonymous. #2: Don’t forget that this site is for anyone who has the imagination and willingness to post.

Thanks Leader12, on to part 2 for me.

Best one yet!

What a marvelous vignette! I am overjoyed to move straightaway on to part 2. Easily deserves 5 stars.

Good premise.

Good back story.

Could have used more foreplay/preliminaries before got heavily into sex.

Those breasts and nipples needed more attention. With dialog during it.

Actual intercourse was rushed.

Four stars.