by Master_Vassago
I know it's been awhile since this was written but I really enjoyed it and would love to see more!
wowwwwwwwwwwwww was a good story only thing wrong was u didn't go on with ch 4 to tell us what they did till mom & dad got home so ch 4 i wait for yummy yummy.
An overall good story but various spelling errors and the way you shifter perspective in the third story was annoying.
Yet more badly-spelled 'by-the-numbers' sex, with no hint of experience; just how old are you? There's nothing new, nothing original, and nothing hot about this drab little story, just more juvenile wank-fantasy, written by a pre-pubescent loner. Go away.