All Comments on 'Triple Threat'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Impregnate her!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Little short but has the potential to get better.

I think it needs a part 2 and 3 even.

cageysea9725cageysea9725about 2 years ago

Do you ever think about your timeline rationally?

The triplets lose their virginities at 18, then have sex with a babysitter. Really? I'm surprised they didn't kill the parent that gets them a babysitter when they're adults.

This was just plain stupid. If you thought this plot was good, you should just stop writing altogether.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Haven't yet read your other stories but must ask: Shouldn't this story be titled "Salirophiliacs? "

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Looking forward to the next part.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Almost too short, and kind of obvious. Not weak enough to lose a star, though.

5*

Tc

Conqeror_KingConqeror_Kingabout 2 years ago

Definitely need a sequel!

grey228grey228over 1 year ago

The triplets sound like monsters, and should be treated as such with 308 Winchester at 3000 fps from about 300-400 yards upwind.

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