by Salirophilia
Little short but has the potential to get better.
I think it needs a part 2 and 3 even.
Do you ever think about your timeline rationally?
The triplets lose their virginities at 18, then have sex with a babysitter. Really? I'm surprised they didn't kill the parent that gets them a babysitter when they're adults.
This was just plain stupid. If you thought this plot was good, you should just stop writing altogether.
Haven't yet read your other stories but must ask: Shouldn't this story be titled "Salirophiliacs? "
Almost too short, and kind of obvious. Not weak enough to lose a star, though.
5*
Tc
The triplets sound like monsters, and should be treated as such with 308 Winchester at 3000 fps from about 300-400 yards upwind.