All Comments on 'Trivia'

by Berticus34

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feendlyfeendlyover 8 years ago
Love to see more.

Although it's short I love the setup and execution. A continuation or similar story setup would be great. Gradual escalation by a wife when presented with a big cock is great. Please write more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Great start!

I really liked it! Good pace, great scenario, and some great "reluctance"! Please keep going as it seems you already have the set up for more.

AnnetteBishopAnnetteBishopover 8 years ago
Good clean Fun

Sounds like good clean fun to me. You should be with her the next time and you can get your nut off too. xoxoxoxo Annette

christmas_apechristmas_apeover 8 years ago
sexcellent flash

i look forward to more. thanks!

impo_61impo_61over 8 years ago
He should be ashamed...

He should be ashamed...The friend's wife didn't take any shit...Divorced the bitch...And what he did? Waited!!! Even after having found out she lied!!! For what? That some day he could be the one sucking the black cock? Pleaseeeeeeee...If his wife didn't respected him, the minimum would be for him to respect himself...1*

TigersmanTigersmanover 8 years ago
Good story

This is a good story with potential for more. Keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
START OF A GREAT RUN.

This story has the potential to become an outstanding series.Where have you been hiding all this time.The way you combine coherent,striding narrative with believable protagonists and wonderful set ups is a joy to behold.I absolutely love the way you've incorporated the use of technology betraying her transgressions.The 'did she,didn't she'element at the start was very highly sexually charged.I wonder if you would ever think about incorporating her cell phone in the next installment.Perhaps a photo taken on her phone which shows the same black guy from earlier,with his hand around her back,where the waistline of skirt appears to be being tugged downward etc.The possibilities are endless,you will no doubt select a sensational scenario.Can't wait,I'm a massive fan.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
just a gutter slut

gutless loser WACC

you have proof

you have lies

you have disrespect

but "maybe she still loves me"

no she does not maybe never did

bookman451bookman451over 8 years ago
Loved it

I love your stories, they are so very hot, please keep going

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Hmm

You talk more about the cocks in your two stories than the women. Do you like cocks? Big cocks. And cum. You sure seem to. Are you just not brave enough to say your gay?

chauncygardnerchauncygardnerover 8 years ago
some excellent stuff

Amazing. Have you read my stuff?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
I agree

I think the author likes cocks...big black ones

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