by Krystal0690
This was an awesome story with an awesome ending. Honestly, you could be a professional writer.
One minute they are at a Laundry after a long ride in a van and next minute they are by the pool in an upscale hotel ????? Needs some work to cover the transition--
Thanks
She was remembering back when she spent more on her bikini than the laundry workers salary. It was a mental lesson for her.
Rich, powerful people act as if they don't know what's happening to their money when it suits their purposes to be able to deny something, but they employ people to keep tabs on it for them. Once she thinks she has enough squirreled away to divorce him, it will probably just disappear, along with her and all the women she's getting out of those brothels, and they'll discover that the Reclamation Ranch has another facility somewhere whose inmates don't get to choose to leave with a bus ticket.
they certainly gave me a thrill, the little devils;)
Great story, I thought you could have expanded on it a bit, but still a really wild story.
interesting plots nevertheless...lady has talent
Obviously, I don't believe a word of it but I enjoyed it. I don't consider the Ladies working in the brothels "whores" so I don't like to hear them called that. They do tend to come and go but several have come to visit me in Vegas during their week off. Since my little condo is kind of lonely I appreciate their company but none so far decided I was marriage material. The part of the story saying they couldn't come or stay in Clark or Washoe County is wrong!
In fact, a favorite Lady "Pro"8 is living in LasVegas and teaching at UNLV ........
That was a very well thought out story. You showed a world that could actually be currently happening since there is so much fake news and fear mongering which makes it easy to divert attention away from the reality of what is going on. There are enough wealthy people with connections that they can get away with pretty much anything and even brag about doing it.