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Click here-You assholes!!! -- She whaled, but with significantly less anger. On the contrary her voice was trailing away, weakened by gasps for air, spasms of muscles and aftershocks of her orgasm.
Derek lifted Maggie up and freed his cock from her pussy. When he planted her down her knees nearly buckled and she leaned heavily against him, only to turn to her husband and slap him across his face with all the strength that was left. Pete smiled at her:
-I know I deserve that. But that was so fucking hot. I would do it again just to see you take his cock.
Maggie felt sudden wave of light headedness and swayed into his arms, resting her head on his shoulder.
-I hate you -- she whispered.
-And you too -- she turned her face and smiled at Derek.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 11 years agoCertainly can use editing. Missing words, such as "the" at the beginning of several sentences, dropped letters, spelling issues all detracted from the story.
clive_iluvnycover 11 years agoGood story. Hope you will submit more. Don't let the naysayers get you down.
Anonymousover 11 years agobut you done it well. Nice build-up gave depth to the characters.4*
Justtooldover 11 years agoGreat read. Very descriptive text. A guy knows where the story is going but has to just keep reading to see if he is right.
ythebadgerover 11 years agoSee if you can get a button on your keyboard that does quotation marks and learn the difference between 'wailed' and 'whaled' (Unless, of course, with her large bust and large ass, Greenpeace were looking to push her safely back into the sea).
Very poor effort.
