All Comments on 'Troubadour Ch. 01'

by TylerBraiden

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Hmm it's ok....

But very sloppy and could really do to be proof read first before it is posted. A few spelling mistakes, 'check', instead of 'cheek', etc. Feels very rushed. I don't know if this is supposed to be a quick one night stand before the actual story though.

63lsmith63lsmithover 7 years ago
yes`````````````````

I liked it.

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