All Comments on 'Trouble in Pandora'

This was a legitimately delightful read, like I was honestly on the edge of my seat as I read through this! This was, without a doubt, super hot but also I really enjoyed the characterization here and the dynamics you created here. Adam and Kurt were attractive before the incident, both in terms of looks and personality so I wasn’t mad when they fucked Kelly. The whole situation with Grace and Roger is so delightfully fucked up and I loved every page of this story, this was honestly the best written piece I’ve read in a while!!!

Holey fuck! (Get it?)

Wow! The most unique settings circumstance I've yet to read on this site! A truly unpolluted breath of fresh air.

And I have to admit, as a 10+ year addicted veteran here, I have read ALOT of stories...

While a major, major plus, nevertheless it's also clear this has been a meticulously planned out and superbly crafted narrative.

It definitely stands to shine to all other authors what an excellent story looks like, including consistent adherence to reality - no bullshit fantasy of infantile dreams, overly exaggerated, simplistic attributes in physicality, sensibility, emotional characterisations - on and on with projected twisted personal psychoses and ancient, disparaged clichés.

A 10+ in my books. Kudos and sincere thanks. Congratulations!