All Comments on 'Trouble in Paradise'

That was awesome! Never would have guessed that it was your first story or that you're not a native English speaker. Five stars and a favorite point!

I am pretty sure I have read this story before. Or one incredibly like it.

Awesome, would have been nice to see a final get together with Heather and Matt before the departure. Or exchange of contact info so they could continue on the return

Amazing, well written and conceived. Hope there are more adventures to follow with Nate and his mom

Awesome story. Very hot. Love mom and son sex. I must admit that I was waiting for the big reveal that Elizabeth engineered that ad and made the whole thing happen. They need to keep fucking and find some more free use opportunities. Or else just go back to the island and fuck all the other guests. Also, Matt and Heather are brother and sister, aren’t they?

Fucking hot!

Good story - would have liked for them to do it the first time instead of with Heather and Matt. 5*

1 star

Excellent first story my friend you're very talented. I look forward to reading more of your work

I fucking hate it i only like strictly Mom and Son stories what a waste of my damn time 👎👎💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩

So he watched her get plowed by strangers for three weeks. Then got everones leftovers at the end and thought it was the greatest thing in the world. Bravo a son gets cucked. Nice.

Out fucking standing

I agree with the anonymous comment that this story existed before this one. This one is a paraphrased, poorly written, Cliff's Notes version of the one they copied from though.

Well written for a non english speaker. Could have done without the group stuff. Should not have waited til the last day to have Mom. Not a very original premise. Not bad though...

Nathan should share mom's bed when they get home. Making him a dad should be mom's goal

What is the copy cat story that everyone talks about?

Good Job! Well done for your first story and not being a native English speaker. Love to see this have a follow-up chapter.

I enjoyed reading it. You did just fine. Only one or two phrases that sounded odd. But it didn't really bother the great story. Looking forward to reading more. Keep writing

such huge turn off bringing in other non incest couple in the story, 1/5

I think you wrote an amazingly erotic story and it made me cum so hard. Mother and son sex is truly one of my hottest fantasies and I thought yours was very well written. Thank you for posting.

Lov the story, second time reading. Would like to see follow up with a second trip to the island. Hope you keep up your writing Great Job!!

Loved your writing, it all makes sense. Hope you write a Second Round Trip. With a set up of Elizabeth's Ex and his girlfriend some how meeting up all together with Nathan by Elizabeth's side.

Thank you

Splashwet

Let me tell you from my experience, true incest are way more possessive than normal couples. So they can't even see their partner with something else.