All Comments on 'Troubled Waters'

Well written, thought the build up was too slow at first but it definitely added towards the dynamic between Sam and Myrna. Loved it!

This is a very compelling story and very talented writing - the characters seem so real and I love the humor, I really laughed at parts

I Loved your story and very well composed and written as well as a straight up turn on.

you used the word "unphased." It should be "unfazed." Very good story not sure why you think people wouldn't like it... :)