All Comments on 'Troubled Waters: The First Day'

Very good start to the story, looking forward to next installment.

If Lori is unhurt and Thompson is out of the picture for good, It'll be sweet. But experience has shown me that none of these stories have the woman come out safely. I Sincerely hope this is different

This story has about everything you could ask for. I hope

you decide to write a next episode as it looks like it could only get even better.

This is a great, imaginative, very sexy story. Can't wait for it to continue! Just hope we're not heading for gore and that kinda shit...

Anyway, congrats, and please continue!

I can't even, I mean, I'm at a loss for word.

More!

very diferent but love it keep it up

Yes, thank you for bringing some real literature here; it will not be easy to continue to write on this same level

Another excellent contribution to your art, FnS. Enjoyed it thoroughly from start to finish, even though I don't gravitate toward the genre (though as you know, I've dabbled in it as a writer). You have me seeing through your hero's eyes - the mark of a truly excellent story. I'm looking forward to the next installment!

Excellent start. Looking forward to the next one.

Exceptionally delicious, not often into incest stories but this one is so reluctant that I'm pretty into it. Off to read the next bit, hope it's as wonderful as this one.

dria.

I loved the story. To me incest is a fantasy I would never act on. It is exciting reading. When I was younger I availed myself of prostitutes in Asia. I was never with one I hadn't gotten to know first in the bar where she worked. Some even got to be friends with a couple.

I once baby sat for women in a bordello so they could entertain customers and came back later at night to sleep with one or the other.

Very well written, interesting, and unique.

This was a wonderful read. I only saw a few grammar errors but nothing to serious tho complain about. Off to part 2

I love your story, on to read the 2nd and 3rd part!

This is a story that could TOTALLY be in the realm of reality! Coincidental, sure, but still possible!!

Sick people in this world, no regard for others...I think the author has just picked at the scab over modern society and itcs behavior!! Too bad there is such a blight on us.

At least Alex and Lorelei had time in bed together as lovers...now we will see what else they get up to!

Five Stars!