by North200
What a shame that the author disappeared. I think I'll steal this and make something of it. Homage to the beginning of a great story
i really need this to be turned into a book. Yeah, it's enough on its own but i got attached to them now.
If you don't do it, i think i will eventually have to write a story with a similar start. Too many ideas in mind
One of the best I have read in a long time. I was crying until the ending. Thank you for "hope".
Brilliant, fantastic, I couldn't stop reading. It doesn't need a part two though.
Great story, loved it. Perfect as is...don't really see where a second part would go with it.
Great story. So the hunter became the lover, I like it. As for part 2 not so much, don't really need it.
They drove off into the sunset and lived happily ever after!
Great storytelling, characters with compelling and relatable motivations, 10/10!
Please I want to read more about this story, it's so good. Is there any way you would write a sequel?
What a lot in 4 pages. A real emotional rollercoaster of a ride. Great writing, lead me right up to the concluding part and then the twist. Def 5 stars.
Have you thought of a sequel as you mentioned in the intro?
Might be the best writing I've seen here. A real story, a real plot, better writing than in some professional fiction.
Great plot twist, excellent character development and dialog. More like a well written short story with good sex than the usual porn movie story line you see here.
Please continue!
I think this is the 3rd story of yours I have read and intend to read the rest. Most of the best writers I have read here no longer write. I'm thrilled to see you are actively writing. Thank you...
Thank you for giving us an excellent read. Your plans of the story have converted into words so seamlessly ... well, I am speechless.
This is so well written and plotted, it shames the disgusting, formulaic cuck/swing authors and the dreck they produce. I could see this becoming a fantastic screenplay.
In my many years of reading Literotica, only 2 other stories have made me cry.
Not everyone can keep you hooked all the way through a long story. Not everyone can describe a sex scene so poignantly. And not everyone can hold the ending so close to his heart that you never even saw it coming. But let’s face it, this dude can WRITE! LoL. Thank you for making my week!
A wonderful piece, great twists. Not sure if a continuation is possible, but would be nice.
I both love and hate you. I chose this story in the hope of aiding some self love and ended up crying like my heart was breaking over the incredible story and writing. So thank you and go to hell for clit blocking me!
I came to this story looking for a particular kink and thought I might find it here based on your description. I usually only go for women with mind control power over men because the reverse tends to make me feel gross as a man. I was not expecting the multiple twists that this story took, and I was enraptured by it immediately. There was genuine depth to the characters; I felt truly invested in the outcome. Your writing has a rare level of quality. It speaks to countless hours of practice coupled with an innate gift for storytelling. Thank you for sharing your valuable time and hard earned skill with us. Writing like this is a gift. We are lucky to have you on this site.
Like the previous anonymous, I had real tears. My heart ached at his seemingly last time in the cab.
Bravo
Amazing character development! I really cared about the people you wrote about. I really hope you start writing again!
Please please please do more when you find a writer who writes this well you want more loved it more of this curse it’s brilliant
Did not know what to expect but after reading that... Simply Amazing.
I would recommend you leave the story there, as much as I would enjoy seeing this story develop, to go any further would distract from the true potency of the situation described.
I look forward to reading your anthology.
Excellent work. Don't make it a series, it would be anti climactic.
Curiously if he had killed himself it would have been just as good.
Do hope this is just the start of the anthology you mentioned. Though this works as an intriguing stand alone story, please continue it - hopefully for many chapters.
Jules
Very compelling story, please continue.
I loved the end and I quite frankly wouldn't mind a sequel!
It kept me on the edge of my seat. You have to do a follow-up with them tracking down the other Cursed or even searching out her sister.
This was such a fantastic story from almost every angle. Cant wait to see if/ how you'd carry on the story.
One of the very best stories in this genre for sure. Hope there is more to come...
I had this story open on a separate tab of my browser and looked at the story title probably a dozen times over two days. Each time I would pass it up and go read something else. I can't say why I delayed reading it or what prompted me to finally begin the story - but I'm glad I did. The closing paragraphs took my emotions from sad, to almost tearful, to confused, and finally to hopeful but scared of what lay ahead. I hope there is more to come. Thank you.
I can count on one hand how many times I've commented on this platform, but I just couldn't resist this time. This story is absolutely beautiful and I wouldn't mind reading more
I'm very grateful for the positive response, and sincerely appreciate people having taken the time to read and comment. Thank you!
I really hope there will be more chapters. This story has a lot of potential. It's clear there's room for something real between Jim and Lisa, if they can figure out how to work around The Curse as much as possible. Heck, maybe his influence can protect her from others like him, thus allowing her to break her dependence on the Lanzapine. I definitely want to see where this goes.
I like the story and it's the first thing of yours I've read. I think the protagonist is fairly unbelievable, but other than that it's good.
I was skeptical about this story at first, but you sucked me in by page 1. I loved the struggle between them. As a submissive woman, I felt for Lisa, and was on the edge of my seat until the very end. I would love to read more stories like this!
5 stars
This was so well written. So intricate and interesting. It was arousing but an actual story too! Alot of stories on here are just about wild uninhibited control with no thought to how it affects other (which isn't inherently a bad thing), but they can come off as creepy and rapey. Yours was so amazingly careful and caring about the victims. Thanks
Well written. I like stories involving the reluctant mind controller. I do hope you decide to continue. The only bad thing is I accidentally taped 3 on the rating and I can't change it. Sorry.
As a trucker myself, I found the story to be very well written and accurate. Love it. I hope there will be follow up chapters.
Not just a stroker, but a well written balanced story. Great piece.
Great story, interesting concept, and great execution. It was really impressive how well you tied me to the driver in just 4 pages. Great work, thanks for writing this.
This is a story everyone should read! Great characters, unique story, well written, and steamy hot. Well done!!
I'm very impressed! Very nice concept and execution, and well written. Bravo bravo.
I'm not a well read individual but i love this story and i would enjoy more of this series
I may have accidently voted 1 star for the story; if I did, I hope it can be changed to 5 stars as that was definitely a mistake. Excellent story; sorry about fat finger. Hope you continue this.
You've written a terrific story here, well plotted and with engaging characters who are very sympathetic-you can really feel the struggle inside each one trying to do what's right. Well done!