All Comments on 'True Lies - Redux Ch. 09'

No sex, but I'm waiting breathlessly for the next chapter anyway.

This story is turning into a novel. The story line is all over the place.

Well the story is definitely losing ( or transitioning from ) the thread in terms of being a True Lies -Redux musing. No way Jamie Lee Curtis gets gang banged for consecutive days. On the other hand potentially interesting possibilities are in the offing.

My first take is to wrap up Jim and Jennifer's characters and assign them their pawn in the game fates. Start a new novel . Second take is that Jim is the one that should have rescued Jennifer, but props for weasel boss takedown scene.

Grayson's sudden transition from bad guy to quasi-ally is giving me a bit of vertigo which is probably what the author intended . I don't think the collective readers are going to enjoy that turnabout, but hope against hope that justbobkc has the Wordsmith chops to pull this off. Good luck.

Tried to read but this writer just lets too much of his political views show. If I wanted politics I would just watch the news. my vote is a -1.

This story is turning into a novel. So Let it be a novel keep on writing....

5*

and no one ever knows the teams. TK U MLJ LV NV

Enjoying this tale. Only problem I have is too long between installments..speed it up please?

This story reminds of a lot of serial novels where there are always yet another enemy, more dangerous and threatening behind the ones we just took down.

Loving this story.

Almost like a Brad Thor novel... but with a thrown in cheating whore wife.

I like the pacing, an installment every week-or-so is really good.

Thanks!

Agree with 'unbelievable' ANON 20 years ago! Think it is much more plausible in 'Twenty-Teen' Foggy Bottom! How many 'alphabet agencies' are engaged in illegal activities against law-abiding citizens? Then add in the agencies who are NOT enforcing US laws! Don't want to sound paranoid, but SOMEtimes the bastards ARE out to get you!

Still a five*, but it has drifted away a goodly bit from LW ... and getting Sweetie brutally (but half-heartedly) raped by Queer Islamic Ruskies is not erotic!

Keep it going. So much better than the Lit cuck crap or interacial black domination that goes for erotic on this site

Getting seriously too pissed off!!!

There better be some goddamned hellish retribution for these motherfucking, murdering and raping shitheads!

A good chapter. First in a long while.

One gripe. The reconciliation is not very believable. While the ordeal Rachel went through is terrible, it doesn't erase the fact that she betrayed Jim and was planning on leaving him. The only thing that prevented that from happening was the fact that Gratson was an asshole. Otherwise, she'd be long gone. This needs to be addressed to sell the reconciliation.

Oh, and a nitpick. The traditional words said to a mourner that you quoted are Hebrew, not Yiddish. An unforced error there.

This chapter better than the last one. I liked it! Things are getting a lots better and the shit is fixing to hit the fan! Keep it up brother! Oh I gave this one a 5.

This has gotten so far away from loving wives but it is a hellava spy novel. Really enjoying this and really really pissed off.

... and this Anon really doesn't give a shit about what happened to her! She deserved everything and I mean EVERYTHING she had done to her! Unfortunately, it looks like a major RAAC is going to be "forced" down the readers throats. So sad.

i really enjoy reading this series. i just wish your chapters were a bit longer.

thank you and keep them coming.

still enjoying your tale thanks 5

is it too much to ask of an author to FINISH THE DAMN STORY before posting it? who the hell is jenn? elaine? what the fuck is supposed to be happening? how many times do you expect people to reread your shit just to recall what the hell you are talking about? fuck you for your publishing technique.

"It was a special government phone - one with the Texas Instruments chipset." That is so cool to know. I prefer the extended range of the Hewlitte-Packard chipset, but I know some real nerds who can't get enough of the obama.comm.org/ chocolate chipset. Remember the first versions, with the Alvin Industries chip-monk set, with that irritating high pitch whine in the background? Man, I just love like the total geekiness of this whole story. And the background stories, to humanize all the characters, like about Grayson's father. Just illuminated so much about the character and added a depth of meaning and empathy that, honestly really surprised me. I actually wept.

So please keep pounding away, on the keys of course (wink, wink). Can't wait for the next enthralling installment.

I still have no clue about all these agency things you have in the USA but I'm trying.

Yes , its beginning to have a Tom Clancy feel to , but that's alright with me . I loved the late , great , TC.

Very entertaining series. please keep it up.

4 *'s

2*

keep going, great LW story

Yes, this is turning into novel length.

I have already written basically 170-180 pages in paperback book length and the whole thing will probably go about 220 pages or so.

As I've mentioned previously my stories kind of write themselves as I go along. Even now I have only some general ideas how this one is going to turn out and I get constant input from all kinds of places: news of the day, comments here, some political forums I continually debate heavily in, remembering OTHER stories like "Homeland" and "24" in this same genre.

Thanks again to all my readers and especially commenters. I especially appreciate those readers who perhaps feel they don't really share many, or maybe any, of my own basic Christian conservative core beliefs but keep reading anyway.

Careful, you might be Bible thumping before you know it. There really isn't anything I've ever read in Literotica that basically isn't already in the Bible. The language just isn't quite as graphic in the Bible. Maybe. Think about it. ;-)