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"You look gorgeous," said Storm as he came over to her.
"Are you sure?" she asked.
"Am I sure? Come on, let's go. We're going to have an amazing night." He took her hand and let her out the house.
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- COMMENTS
LitLover469almost 6 years agoI just discovered this story and read through all 26 chapters! I heart Storm and Salina! I like how Sal and Storm both have evolved over the course of the story. Storm is still kind of a demanding baby at times, but the fact that he would have an actual convo with Mitch, allow Mitch to eat with his friends, and care about Mitch's well-being because of how much Salina cares shows so much growth! I'm cheering for a Mitch and Storm friendship!
I would love for Sal to be more confident, but I don't think she will be until she knows exactly what happened to her. I'd also like to see her show the very educated and savvy side of herself to Storm at some point. She speaks different languages, she's smart as hell, etc., so I want him to be wowed by that side of Salina.
I hope Storm tells her the truth because keeping this secret will probably backfire on him if she finds out, even if he is trying to protect her.
Also, I wonder if that creepy cop is going to reappear at some point. I thought maybe he was Tracey's boyfriend...
Anonymousalmost 6 years agoMissed these two. Now that Salina is herself and not Sally, I need her to gain some confidence. Storm is pushy as always, but maybe he can channel that into making her feel normal and comfortable in her own skin. Hope to see some of their love making soon .
Obedientsubalmost 6 years agoThis was good, but I don't think that Salina is getting the chance to turn the corner as far as how she views herself. She needs to be a little more confident in herself. Storm needs to remember that he can't get what he wants all of the time and be careful on how he chooses his words. He doesn't want to make her feel less than what she already feels about herself. He needs to remember what the Dr had just told him.
Ohhh and maybe do a little proofreading, but other than that I'm glad you're back.
Continue to be well and blessed.
