All Comments on 'Truth or Dare'

This was OK, but very predictable.

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I hope the posting of this is not a signal that you are abandoning "The Uprising". That story is so much more than "OK".

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<I>-- srgeek --</I>

Not very well written... too many problems to detail but just having a good editor would help some.

Had a few errors but not so much that made me stop reading. Enjoyed the story as the ending is one of my fave fantasies.

good transitions with the pov, which isn't easy to do. a good, fast-paced sex treat.

Please, keep writing.

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