by NerdyGyrl39
I loved tour story!
It is well told and vivid!
Please keep up the great work!
My sister and I had sex together all through college and still do when we get the chance.Thanks for sharing
how do i get an invitation to a party like that??!! great story.
5***** Nice work. BTW I have no idea what that title means. I made it up.
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I know this is Literotica, and we're supposed to "suspend disbelief", but this was asking a bit much of your readers. If nobody had known them, or at least nobody knew they were siblings, I might have been able to pretend it was at least possible. But in real life, there's this thing about "putting the djinni back in the bottle". You do something, and it's only a minute or a few minutes of your life, but it stays with you. Permanently.
It's been almost thirty years since I attended university, but when my old friends and I refer to people we knew back then, there are people who we still refer to as "Larry-who-fucked-his-cousin" and "Ron-who-blew-the-DJ". If there was even a GERM of truth to this story, the protagonist would be "Ash-who-fucked-her-brother" for the rest of her life.
When they get home, and a day or two has passed, let them try this again at home in the comfort of their own room. Then, they can do the proper exploration, blow job, etc., and she can actually taste and touch him everywhere and they can give each other an extended mutual pleasure!
Epiphany_Jones Comment
Just makes no sense that they'd have sex in front of others so casually
Could of made it a bro/sis truth or dare
I liked the story and found it exciting. It was also my first story to be read on Literotica this year! A good way to start the year.
Usually the only incest stories I read are D/D. But I liked this one. Never mind the negative comments. This is after all, a place to post FICTION. Looking forward to reading more of your stories. (I gave it 5 stars)
Brilliant story, especially for a first timer. Keep up the good work xx
Perhaps you were off school the day they taught English grammar? It's could HAVE!
The story was OK, nothing special and nothing that hasn't been done before. With so many stories here now it's difficult to find something original.
I've been reading stories on this site for a long time and I'm currently writing one of my own. Don't listen to the jerks with their rude comments. This story is great, especially for being your first one. Maybe a little more building up next time?
Keep up the good work cant wait to see what you have coming next. Also ignore all the negative comments you did great for your very first one
A couple of grammar errors. IMO, it should have been doggystyle as there's less of an intimate connection, and if she went into the night with a crush on him, yet still hesitant, her reaction would be more natural.
Ignore the hate! I loved it and hope to see a part two to the siblings story!
GOOD STORY..Love to read about her fucking her brother again
Great idea, good execution. More details on the party and game would have been nice. It could have been twice as long.
pretty good starting point but needs more details and you need a ending the ending sucks
I gave it a 5* but would rate it even higher. I wish the author had taken it further and related what they did in later times and years. I would think that once the ice was broken he and she would go back for more. She gave him a little oral and i think that he would have wanted to return the favor. I hope that there is more to come and CUM, too for that matter.
I hoped I would be paired with my brother-in-law. But...no such luck. But I was paired with my husband's co-worker. That caused some friction with my husband and me. I have been Dared to display my breasts, to be suckled by a friend. In a Truth, I had to tell who had the largest cock I had ever touched. (My husband didn't come close.) I have been asked if I had ever experienced a threesome and if I had ever cheated on my husband.
My sister loved having her girlfriends sleep over and as a horny guy a year younger, I liked it too. Loved seeing them in flimsy nighties - especially Stephanie. One boring Saturday afternoon they invited me to play spin the bottle. I was dared to kiss Stephanie and she took me into the other room and give me a wonderful lounge kiss. As we we walking back, she said my sister was next. Sure enough she was and she was as good as Stephanie. It turns out that they had been practice kissing with one another. I told them the practice paid off and I needed more kissing practice. By the end of the afternoon we'd all performed oral sex on each other. After that my sister and I practiced a lot. When my mom caught us, she was willing to let me practice with her too.
Nice story. But what happened to the "couple of people" who were riding with them?
Dubious consent. No one should ever feel coerced or pressured into sex, or it's not strictly consensual.