All Comments on 'Truth or Dare Ch. 02'

Part 2 certainly didn’t disappoint, i am keeping everything crossed for a part 3

Getting bit laborious.

This has now become a waste of time. You failed to move the plot anywhere. That would have been fine had this been submitted with the first installment, then concluded only after you continued the story rather than rehash (with even less plot development) what had already taken place.

You also failed to improve any of the problems.

Had you just made the effort, I was going to offer to edit (not proofread, but actually edit, something I've been paid to do over my lifetime) your stories, but I'm not going to for someone that thinks they don't make mistakes.

I rescind my previous encouragement.

good, slow buildup

Nice work. Looking forward to more.

You tease! I can't wait for the next installment.

Wow this is so well written!!

Beautiful build up, tantalisingly teasing, and looking forward…anticipating.

Hurry up with the next chapter.

I enjoy the slow build towards what I hope is a very wonderful consummation. I think I’m falling in love with how you write.

Please finish your story before submitting. Well written but seemed pointless.

Love it have me hooked on the build up! Such a great series thus far, can't wait for what I hope is many more chapters.

Not a big fan of SSSA(sudden same sex attraction). Never liked plot twists.

Too much of a tease. I know that there are more installments, but since this is the second and they apparently have not even kissed yet, it is moving too slowly for me. 2/5

I love the slow build, though I'm obviously hoping for more in the coming chapters.

Wow, I absolutely love this story. I can't wait to get to the next chapter!