All Comments on 'Tsunami'

Can't wait if you continue great story

I also cannot wait to see if this story continues

Fantastic story line, looking forward to reading more as this plot develops!

I read the whole story before commenting and it is one of best on here. im not a story writer so I don't know the guide lines you use when writing one , I think it was written perfectly . this could of happened in real life too . thank you

Great story line with great potential for future chapters

Please don't stop more!.

So, the title covers my fiction writing abilities. Great story, nicely written and edited. I do hope you will continue the saga.

Excellent beginning - the survival bits made it a real story. It might have been more real if Crystal and her brother (couldn't find his name on page 4} had hesitated a little before starting sex. They were in grief at losing their parents, after all. But I hope we won't have to wait long before Ch2, et/al.

They are engaging characters that maybe jumped into bed a little quickly. Other than that caveat, excellent story. Please continue

Great read. i hope you continue the story

... the fact the the brother sounded part Bear Grylls and part he-who-retains-his-wits-even-on-the-face-of-seeing-his-parents-die-horribly-infront-of-his-own-eyes. I was really looking for a more mournful tone to the initial parts and not the delightfully light banter that actually ensued.

Does the author wants his good works to sink in the mire of all the "brother - sister" driftwood? Atleast he had the good sense of tagging siblings love in his first submission.

Yay! Five stars, I have an actual good story to read for a change! I've only sorted through about thirty duds before I found it, lol!

Looking forward to another chapter, but if not this was great!

Fantastic story. I hope you write more chapter(s) to the conclusion. I can't wait to see how their life together continues to happily ever after. Thank you

excellent story. Well written and well planned. Hope you'll continue your great work.

Thanks for the good read.

what a great story you tell. Loved it.