by AnsemRai
You have a 7 1/2" cock. Well, at least it isn't an unbelieveable 8" one. LOL
Overall, not bad. Just had to poke a little fun.
the best part of incest stories to me is tje teasing and lust and desire that leads the characters to cross the uncrossable line, and this story was heavy on this build up.
i really enjoyed it and loved the way you left the diir open for a sequel with the biological daughter, who presumably is the one reading the incest stories.
write it!
Great read, amazing jackoff story, pictured every scene. Fantasized many times to have my step daughter. Can't wait for the sequels. You can take this to several different directions. Mother /daughter, father / other daughter, mother/son, father/son, brother/sister, brother /other sister, sister/sister, father/ both daughters, etc..
Dude! That story was so fucking hot. I was so fucking wet when I read it. I could not keep my hands out of my panties. I'm turned on by incest stories, but most of the incest stories on her are unreadable because they put the participating parties in a situation that no one would ever believe could happen. You though. You slowly revealed over time exactly how they got to the point that they could cross that taboo. Perfect. I can't wait until I have time to read your other stories.
Overall, I enjoyed this story. The plot builds slowly and is relatively fully developed. I like the reference to other Literotica stories but it's a little too much self-aggrandizement to only point to your own. Surely you have some favorites (other than yours) that you could have used? It took points away when I realized your referenced stories for your plot were only your own.
I loved your story. To be honest I think a lot of my pleasure came from the author knowing how to write proper English - it's very off-putting trying to read erotica if an author cannot spell or construct a sentence properly. I thought the content and build up were good and the characters were believable. Good job.
Great story but when daddy and his daughter get to fuck it didnt seem that enjoyable for them. why are they just talking like its nothing
i have been screwing my oldest daughter for many yrs now since she was 20 (28 now) anyway my just turned 18 yr old daughter found out and she approached me recently and said i'm next daddy....so we had a 3some very much family fun.
Very well- written, with a great buildup. I liked the detail, and the way you took a familar theme, and gave it a fresh new perspective, while keeping it believeable. Excellent story.
I am anxious to see if you do a follow up with the other daughter then 3some.
How your hero managed to restrain himself for so long was an exercise in suspense.
Must agree with the comment over the gentle restraint regarding his organ size.
Bloody good yarn !
Id love to have a stepdad fuck my pussy haha being 18 and sexually frustrated
This is an example of what will happen to those who read Literotica stories.
A good fuck awaits them)