by emma_sub
Nice story, with great eroticism. It was full of mistakes, most glaring one was the
fact that Tuesday was wearing a cock gag and able to speak with great clarity to
her master. Also you had many syntax errors and spelling errors, need to proof-
read your writings. If you are proud of your work and you should be, then editing
your story will make it more polished and appreciated. You have great potential
as your descriptions and buildup is extremely well thought out and charged with
eroticism.
I feel like a spectator as I read your exquisite stories...
Emma_sub is one of the best authors on this site.. her stories keep me hard the entire time...