All Comments on 'Tug of War'

Very nice!

So good to read such a wonderful and ROMANTIC story of two siblings so deply in LOVE. Yes they both made a mistake, but they realised soon enough to finally admit how much they loved each other, and will do whatever they need to, to stay together, and LOVE each other forever.

Nice gentle sibling love story. Well written story, didn't notice any obvious spelling of grammar issues. Thought a one point the parents were going to find out about their relationship when they went to Alex's bedroom after watching movie with the family but didn't pan out that way.

Doesn't sound like there's another chapter and from the current story line I don't expect to see one.

Loved your story. Not predictable. Please keep writing.

Not "fantastic", not "wonderful". Will people stop praising these sub-literate efforts!

As I stated, this is barely English: "The two females resembled, both having dark brown hair, though her mother's was up in a messy bun as usual, and hers flowed freely to the small of her back." The two females resembled?!!

For the most part, your direction and descriptions are clear, but some of the wording as another commenter pointed out (though more rudely than needed) could use some work. The comedy, however, had me chuckling audibly while I read this one. Keep up the good work, and maybe upgrade the prose a little.

Fakeazzshitt college? At least there's honesty in this. Overall, would like to see this continue with the consequences of him cumming inside of her.

Love this. Skip the college name. Weird and not necessary. Continuation?

please keep going but keep them exclusive. don't worry about these anonymous negative comments. it's obvious they don't know what they are saying. otherwise they would have a published story on this site. keep up the great work. looking forward to your next story.

I really enjoyed reading this story I hope you write more of it!!!

I agree this needs to be continued in another chapter. I want to read more of the siblings and maybe get her pregnant by brother. Yay! And the school's name cracked me up.

The constant bickering between the two even when they're fucking, David especially, brought this down a notch. Please, no more chapters. Even if there were, I wouldn't read them.

Nah!! Didn’t do it for me at all. Better luck next time.

the Dustin Leiber concert? Dairy King? Brown Panther? Fake-as-shit College? OMG!!!

The humor strung throughout this piece was the best part! Totally priceless tongue-in-cheek treasure!

I was completely ROFLMAO from beginning to end.

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Sadly enough, this is the first story that Wargamer and I disagree on. I loved it for the sarcasm if nothing else. 5/5

Why finish the story there. You’ve already gone the hard work why not continue on there’s so much more you can do with this. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Nothing ‘super’ here, it’s chock full of appalling errors.

Nnnaaahhhhhh...you really did not do yourself any favors here...still has grammar and proofreading errors...you got **4** stars...barely, was almost 3!

Wow that was bad. Your spelling and grammar are atrocious!

We were already told their ages; why repeat it throughout the story?

3⭐️ story and kinda boring in a way,, the repeats of there ages and the constant drama between them

Good story but if you like his writing you should check out his visual novels. Dude’s good as fuck. Best one is Secret Summer