All Comments on 'Tumbleweed Ch. 01'

You're right - your forte is westerns and I look forward to your stories. This looks like the beginning of another good submission - wish they were a bit longer though.

You certainly excell with the westerns. Keep them coming.

Love everything you write, please continue your wonderful stories and thank you more

you've been gone for 6 months or so...good to have you back...

Your westerns are my favorite ones of the genre. Great to see a new story although I often re-read the old ones.

Any woman with a son that smart and resourceful has got to be a woman to love, with a character so deep and genuine that it flows right out of her soul into her son's. That's beauty.

Now I will go back to reading from that point, but I know already this should be a story worth reading. Thank You.

And I'll let you know if otherwise.

You've found your niche! I wonder if any other time and place has offered men the freedom to grow and carve out a life like the American West did. Great character development! I already care about Jeremiah, Jake and Emily.

leaving a trail in the dust, TK U MLJ LV NV

thank you for writing

I agree with your self assessment, you have found your genre.

your Forte is Westerns. You write the best. Thanks and good to see you again.

But, 'glad to ride into El Paso.......' must have been desperate

that you're committed to writing westerns because I love 'em.

Thanks

Phil

Second time through. Still an excellent story!

Good start!! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

*****Damn I want to buy me a COWBOY HAT!! damn good start. Looking forward to future Chapters. Thanks for sharing.

Good start! Some missing commas, but it looks like it will be an enjoyable story. The conflict isn't clear just yet, but Jake is interesting.