All Comments on 'Turn Me On'

I would have had the brother catch them in the act and join in fucking his sister.

The author lacks basic knowledge of the slang terms for this kind of story. It's "cum/cumming" for semen/orgasm NOT 'come' as used.

Many girls get with brother's friends and vice versa. A good realistic story, keep writing, you have potential

To whomever wrote that "come" is not used properly in the story... You are an idiot. Slang terms like cum, cumming and so forth were derived from the verb 'to come' in the first place, and if you don't know that I'll say it again. You are an idiot. Honestly, people, using the original verb to signify the act of 'cumming' or 'cum 'should not be so surprising, even on the internet. Used here in the following sentences:

"Ohh, God, I'm coming ", "Fuck, yeah girl, eat my come!" etc.

Ohhhhh I'm turned on now! Use the words fuckin correct next time though love, it's cumming not coming retard. Off to fuck my bf now, wish me well ;)

i half came i am still rock hard!!