All Comments on 'Turning of the Stars Ch. 01'

I really enjoyed these characters. They spark off of each other please more

Your dialog between Grant and Anna was excellent and at appropriate times just plain hot. Really looking forward to the next chapter (s).

You made Grant's tattooed body sound very sexy---and then the snippet of phone sex on the drive home sizzled.

It's going to be a steamy ride, I can tell!

I was riveted, from the first few words until the end. I laughed, smiled, had to turn a fan on, lol! I can't wait for another chapter!

I'm loving this more than "Breath" (and I loved Breath!) ! I don't trust Corie though.

This was a fantastic introduction, but I disagree with the other commentators that this is as good as Breath. I feel like Anna prematurely spilled her guts to a complete stranger, plus what book store worker would bad mouth an author without even knowing anything about him? I hope we learn more about Anna's mental jump/presumptions: did she have a bad relationship with a writer before? Is she really just that impulsive? I'm excited to keep reading- please keep up the fantastic work Panthem!

Just stumbled across this story and SOOO glad I did! One of the best I've read!

Love ur stories as always... Ur characters are very realistic n relateable. Grant sounds super sexy with all em tatts xox

I really like where you are taking these characters and their relationship!

after the first chapter, I would'nt be sittin here and unclinchin' my thighs.....

Jeeeeeeeeeze!

Better get back to the garden Wink Wink!!

and it still makes me cackle.

"Because some self-involved blowhard with an inflated sense of entitlement decided to push his weight around and demand the most obscure groceries he could google."

One of my favorite lines on the site EVER.

I was hooked from the minute I started reading. Very sexy and fantastic characters and story line.

Chapter two here I come!

It appears Anna and Grant both fit that category. A great first chapter--I was on page 4 before I realized it. The plot and smooth writing style makes this story so easy to read.

Excuse me, but now I have to read Chapter 2.

looking forward to the next chapter already

This is the first thing of yours that I read, and I can't wait to move on to the next chapter. Thanks!

VisualPerv

xxxhugsxxx

always a treat to stumble upon storys as good as this one.

Almost 2017, and I agree with the previous comments that I'm so fucking glad I found this. You're a star... lol can I just say I found you through some dude called Handsinthedark and I'll throw some shade and say his stories are kinda a let down after reading his bio, I checked his bio and voilà, you were there, you're a real gem dude.