All Comments on 'Turning of the Stars Ch. 03'

by Panthem

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GimletEdgeGimletEdgeover 12 years ago
Plenty of panting going on.

This chapter does its fair share of teasing. Once the lovers get down to brass tacks, their sexual tension is released in several searing sequences. Very steamy.

It's fun to see a chef's approach to love making. Very controlled/controlling, rhythmic and deliberate. Poor Anna has to hang on for dear life.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Seriously HOT!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

This story is so sexy!!!!

cantfightfatecantfightfateover 12 years ago
Wow.

Another great chapter. I like that you manage to tell us the characters' back stories but still move ahead with the current plot. I like them both and they are HOT together. Looking forward to the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
more please!

more more more. loves it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
I can't wait for the next chapter!

I'm seriously loving this story, I really hope you write more soon.

EuphoriaSlam69EuphoriaSlam69almost 12 years ago
Seriously some of the sexiest hottest shit on this site!

WHOA! Brilliant!

FemmeCyniqueFemmeCyniqueover 11 years ago
:D

That was so fucking hot... And I love that she's not being judgmental about his past and all.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
The Hottest

The scene where he's touching her on the chair... one of if not THE hottest scene I've ever read on this site. Holy shit

Privates1stClassPrivates1stClassalmost 11 years ago
Wow!

Their sex scenes are so hot, but the last one was the hottest of all. Loved all of them. Panthem, you certainly have a way to paint with words. Best chapter so far.

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