All Comments on 'Turning Seasons'

Another great story of yours. I loved it.

You expressed her loneliness so well. That feeling of always been outside the norm, wanting to belong but somehow you just don't. I'd like to see this story expand a couple more chapters, to see their relationship deepen and grow.

A sweet story with a happy ending. As someone else commented, you portrayed Sarah's loneliness very well. Thanks for the read and good luck in the contest.

A beginning, middle and end; how perfectly satifactory.

The descriptions were fine and meaningful.

The descriptions of Wiccan rituals enhanced this story immensely. Nicely done, Magica. Good luck in the contest.

as a romance should be. I'm always a sucker for a happy ending.

I should have real friends as good as her imaginary ones. An elegantly turned tale, MP, full of life and poetry.

Absolutely wonderful and well researched...a perfect spell woven by the character and a perfect spell woven on the reading leading to an incredible and hot experience!

Great story you can really relate to the main character and her feelings. It ends perfectly! Keep writing!

and Blessed Be.

Maharat

I loved the story, but I just wished it was longer. Thanks

I loved this story, Magica. Very hot and romantic. Good luck with the contest!

You can write! I loved your mastery of mechanics and style, extremely well written. I applaud you.

long after I was supposed to be doing something else. My compliments, magica!

Kinship is a beautiful thing to read, to feel, to have. Thank you for writing.

Fabulous details and imagery, Magica! Bravo!

Lovely story. Good luck with the contest.

Very sweet, loved the imagery!and the name of the cat, sam...sigh.LOL.

Good luck!

Abs.

It took a couple of days to read both parts, and now I am happy I did! Your work is not far from what I call "an erotic masterpiece", but I have to remember to read erotica stories in the evening instead of early morning, otherwise I will not be able to work all the day long ;-)

...with a lot of positives to focus on, as we already discussed. Good luck and keep writing!!!

...with just the right touch of heat.

I liked the detail you included on the ceremony, especially the prayers. Sarah seemed a little easy to seduce, but I suppose that was the point. Good luck!

Now THIS was a romance!!!

Sweet, by George. My only complaint, as someone already said, would that this story were longer! Nice work.

Being a solitary I recognised many of the details! Iwas solidly and sweet. And while I personally wanted more build up between her and George, it was very well done none the less! Good LUCK!

Very well written. It seems you took the time to put your soul into it. Very nicely done.

By the way you have beautiful eyes.

With respect

DG Hear

enjoyed your story a lot, good luck in the contest...

gorgeous, lovely, wonderful, sexy, touching, moving, and inspiring all at once!

Thank you for sharing this beautiful gem of a story.

Blessed be.

And i am a Witch...

There it's no such thing as coincidence !